Dudley's dungeon
Monday, 22 October, 2007 |
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@ "Oh, this must be my next batch of fan mail!" d "You wish." @ "Quiet, Dogley."
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@ "..." d "Well? What's it say? What's it ... Dudley?"
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Average rating: Good Number of ratings: 13
Comments
SomeoneElse |
October 22, 2007 01:17
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First comment: 11 September, 2006 |
143 comments written |
Not funny, but promising something good. It had better be good. |
Gadora |
October 22, 2007 02:40
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First comment: 21 September, 2006 |
88 comments written |
It looks like an interesting set-up. |
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October 22, 2007 12:45
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First comment: 1 April, 2004 |
431 comments written |
Huh? But they all could easily get a job in the park! could sell souvenirs, gnomes'd have this great musical, and Rodney could run all those game thingies (Hit the bottles and win the [cheap plastic imitation of] !). I can't see why they can complain. |
projo |
October 22, 2007 14:22
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First comment: 22 October, 2007 |
2 comments written |
Why so little Es? This is a great concept. |
Dol |
October 22, 2007 17:21
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First comment: 27 March, 2007 |
24 comments written |
This sounds amusing...
Even though there's no real punchline, I like how the last two rows are laid out. Fresh storylines are also exciting. A good cliffhanger, I say, or something like that. Definitely makes me want more. |
Fathead |
October 22, 2007 18:03
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First comment: 1 April, 2006 |
1136 comments written |
Real cute with the smilies.
How do you do small caps? |
Jack Simth |
October 22, 2007 23:30
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First comment: 3 January, 2005 |
59 comments written |
There is a message for a demolished dungeon.... usually only happens when there's a fatal error (not often).... but kinda appropriate here. |
Fathead |
October 24, 2007 02:06
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First comment: 1 April, 2006 |
1136 comments written |
Your name is Simth? |
Grognor |
October 25, 2007 04:21
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First comment: 4 April, 2007 |
1161 comments written |
A novel idea executed perfectly. |
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