Dudley's dungeon
Thursday, 25 December, 2008 |
by Newtkiller |
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@ "A ! Fire!"
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You shoot a
bolt. The bolt hits
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The
breaks in tears! You
drown...
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/ REST IN \
/ PEACE \
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| Dudley |
|Killed by abusing|
| his power |
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Rating
Average rating: Good Number of ratings: 8
Comments
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December 25, 2008 00:47
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First comment: 26 July, 2004 |
155 comments written |
I doubt that... stuff... in the last panel is actually not part of the comic. Either way I don't entirely get it. |
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December 25, 2008 00:48
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First comment: 26 July, 2004 |
155 comments written |
Er I meant, actually part of the comic...
Apologies the for sentence malformed. |
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December 25, 2008 00:52
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First comment: 1 April, 2004 |
431 comments written |
It's postmodern, @. |
Wellan |
December 25, 2008 01:38
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First comment: 27 November, 2007 |
247 comments written |
Notice that there's a blank line above the gravestone in the last panel? "That stuff" is what happens when the comic has too many lines. There was an extra line break in there somewhere.
'K, enough technical stuff. This comic was funny, but a bit unrealistic (you can't fit that many tears in one ), so I rate it fair. |
SomeoneElse |
December 25, 2008 09:09
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First comment: 11 September, 2006 |
143 comments written |
Comic ruined by weird glitchiness. |
Newtkiller |
December 25, 2008 10:26
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First comment: 28 October, 2008 |
127 comments written |
Too bad. Comic ruined by One little line. |
Quint Sakugarne |
December 25, 2008 18:40
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First comment: 1 January, 2008 |
233 comments written |
Dion: PLEASE FIX END OF COMIC.
Unless that gibberish is supposed to be the sound of Dudley's growling gibberish about being killed by something really stupid and random.
The rest of the comment is awesome, so I rate it Excellent. |
Newtkiller |
December 25, 2008 19:35
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First comment: 28 October, 2008 |
127 comments written |
Dion, it's the line under the text on pannel 3 that needs to be erased. That way everything turns back to normal. |
Nate879 |
December 25, 2008 23:00
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First comment: 11 October, 2008 |
8 comments written |
Does Dion even view these to make sure they look right? |
f |
December 25, 2008 23:16
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First comment: 19 June, 2007 |
3 comments written |
I like the surrealism provided by the error. |
motty |
December 26, 2008 03:30
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First comment: 22 November, 2006 |
9 comments written |
Yes. The error makes the comic. It would be nice to see a fixed version posted separately. |
Nesman |
December 29, 2008 14:55
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First comment: 4 January, 2005 |
112 comments written |
Dion's going to fix the comic and leave these comments. I wonder which will be more surreal; the comments without the error, or the original comic. |
Dion |
December 31, 2008 11:22
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First comment: 2 February, 2004 |
100 comments written |
Apologies. Fixed. |
Newtkiller |
January 2, 2009 19:40
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First comment: 28 October, 2008 |
127 comments written |
Thanks. No apologies needed on my side. I'll look twice before sending the comic next time. |
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